http://rai-rai-stars.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rai-rai-stars.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hellfirehalos 2010-10-21 08:55 pm (UTC)

Heyy, this really good :) the way you portray the boys personalities is brilliant. Great story line too, please update soon, I cant wait to know what happens next :D
Keep up the good work (man, do i sound like a teacher :/ haha)
Peace out, Rai x
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